NaPoWriMo, 2013, #26, Optional Ruin a Good Poem by Pulling Out Words for Another

This was another hysterical prompt (optional) where we were prompted (optionally) to take a poem written by another author and make another poem out of those words. Then we crossed out the words that we used and if we could, write a poem from them and so on and on.

Of course I had to choose a poem by Longfellow because I am also reading a book of local history written by John Ogden Wadsworth. Each word I took out of the original made my poem sillier and sillier!

I chose:
THE CHILD ASLEEP (From the French) by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Sweet babe! true portrait of thy father’s face,
Sleep on the bosom that thy lips have pressed!
Sleep, little one; and closely, gently place.
Thy drowsy eyelid on thy mother’s breast.

Upon that tender eye my little friend,
Soft sleep shall come, that cometh not to me!
I watch to see thee, nourish thee, defend; –
‘T is sweet to watch for thee, – alone for thee!

His arms fall down; sleep sits upon his brow;
His eye is closed; he sleeps, nor dreams of harm.
Wore not his cheek the apple’s ruddy glow,
Would you not say he slept on Death’s cold arm?

Awake my boy! – I tremble with affright!
Awake, and chase this fatal thought! – Unclose
Thine eye but for one moment on the light!
Even at the price of thine, give me repose!

Sweet error! – he but slept, – I breathe again; –
Come, gentle dreams, the hour of sleep beguile.
O! when shall he, for whom I sigh in vain,
Beside me watch to see thy waking smile?

Then removed some words:
Sweet babe! true portrait of thy father’s face,
Sleep on the bosom that thy lips have pressed!
Sleep, little one; and closely, gently place.
Thy drowsy eyelid on thy mother’s breast.

Upon that tender eye my little friend,
Soft sleep shall come, that cometh not to me!
I watch to see thee, nourish thee, defend; –
‘T is sweet to watch for thee, – alone for thee!

His arms fall down; sleep sits upon his brow;
His eye is closed; he sleeps, nor dreams of harm.
Wore not his cheek the apple’s ruddy glow,
Would you not say he slept on Death’s cold arm?

Awake my boy! – I tremble with affright!
Awake, and chase this fatal thought! – Unclose
Thine eye but for one moment on the light!
Even at the price of thine, give me repose!

Sweet error! – he but slept, – I breathe again;Come, gentle dreams, the hour of sleep beguile.
O! when shall he, for whom I sigh in vain,
Beside me watch to see thy waking smile?

Then I removed some more words (which made it silly and nonsenceble):

Sweet true portrait.
Lips sleep on
Closely. Sleep,
thy mother’s eyelid.

Upon my eye
shall that cometh.
See thee nourish
alone is sweet.

Arms fall down.
Eye is closed.
Wore the ruddy.
Slept he on.

With tremble, I
chase this thought
but one moment.
Give me thine.

He but slept
hour of sleep.
Whom I shall.
watch to see.

Removing some more:

Thy babe
that have thy
little one
drowsy

Little friend,
soft sleep come.
I watch
for thee.

Sleep sits.
He sleeps.
Apples,
you say.

Awake!
Fatal
for thine
price.

Error!
the dreams!
O!
Waking.

Running out of words here!

Of
and
on
thy.

To ‘t
His,
nor his
would.

My boy,
and even
of sweet
gentle, for me.

NaPoWriMo, 2013, #25, Ballad Prompt (Optional)

This, my first attempt at a ballad, was based on where I live. Upstate New York, Wayne county, is filled with fertile soil and the weather allows the cultivation of apple tree orchards and fields of corn. “Drumlins” are the unique hills that run north to south that were created by the glacier movement around Lake Ontario. Due to the orchards and fields, when harvest comes you can bet your bottom dollar that I’ll be sitting here eating apple pies and fresh corn!

BALLAD OF WAYNE COUNTY

I saw her at a carnival
I knew she was my love.
A little slip of everything.
My little turtle-dove.

Not often do I leave the farm
it’s hard to make away
with apple trees and fields of corn
and chores to do each day.

She bought a piece of apple pie
and smiled as she strolled by.
her perfect figure passing me
before I caught her eye.

For years she kept just out of reach,
each drumlin she would climb
and seeing her much closer then
get larger I did find.

As I was reaching middle age
I reached her eye to eye
and saw to my astonishment
She’d eaten too much pie!

So, back to farming I did go
with no one for my wife
and now my apple trees and corn
are happily my life.

NaPoWriMo No Prompt 2013 #24

RENEWAL

The small sip that I’ve taken of this life
Has shown me that much of the strife
May not be overcome.

However I truly believe that I
Will be stronger. It is my
Gut feeling.

I will be stronger in my next life because
My gut feelings will reflect how it was
Here and now.

So, have cheer when you see the earth crumbling
Because although you may see how it is humbling
You will come back

And the earth will still be here waiting for you
Restored and with creatures incredibly new
And delightful.

NaPoWriMo, 2013, #24

All of the words in the poem were words that were found in anagrams of my name which was the (optional) prompt for today.

ANAGRAM NAMED SELF-PORTRAIT

My care in any idyl may be led by my icy cry
And I deny my care in any enemy
And my care denied by my end led by my deny.

Merely drab, drably mere, I have no mercy
And am leery of bad men called by my
Cerebral lambency.

I deny merrily any embrace by my relic, me,
And reclaim any yearned and earned rebel, mine
And blame liable, maybe lyrical, bad men merrily.

NaPoWriMo, Another #23, 2013

THIS RHYME IS A CRIME

My brain it won’t stop thinking in rhymes.
Is there a psychological title in these times?
My brain it won’t stop thinking in rhymes!

Must every sentence be part of this poem
everywhere I go, not just when I’m home?
Must every sentence be part of this poem?

My mind is spinning out of control
and my body is falling into the hole.
My mind is spinning out of control!

I’ve entered space and am passing the moon
singing all the while my mysterious tune
I’ve entered space and am passing the moon.

What’s happening to me as I move my lips
when I feel the universe floor as it rips.
what’s happening to me as I move my lips?

I’m torn apart as my rhymes bounce back
as they hit me like a kind of flack.
I’m torn apart as my rhymes bounce back!

I’ll go upstairs and bury my head
under my pillow upon my bed.
I’ll go upstairs and bury my head.

NaPoWriMo, 2013, #23, Prompted Optional Triolet

DEAD SUNBURN

My love is lying in the sun
that fair skin usually makes her shun.
The hunters are starting their day.
My love is lying in the sun.
I hope the hunters miss their prey.
My love is lying in the sun
that fair skin usually makes her shun!

NaPoWriMo 2013 #22 Squared or …Around the Earth for Earth Day

Working on my genealogy fan chart

I realize now how many others took part

In the making of all of me.

It  just isn’t easy to see

within my heart

where I start.

Now others take over

as I get older

and I let them because at times I just want to rest

and besides I have to give those genes a test

I see that I have a little of everything

the all-american human being

It’s no wonder I’m always so confused

I give myself permission to be excused

As I am them

a glistening gem

 

NaPoWriMo 2013 #22, Earthday Prompt

TREE HUGGING

Stooping, parting grass, seeing Toad sitting in his doorway,
talking to a neighbor friend. Looking, each doorway containing
at least one Toad eavesdropping, living in this apartment cave
that joins in the center communal room.

Vine stairways climb up, held by toeholds in bark
to doorway of Bird who tries to fill never-ending beaks while
around and around Squirrel is racing, using huge tree arms
as platforms to the balcony made by amputation of an arm and
now a miniature meadow with grass, bushes and mushrooms.

Above, Woodpecker anoints my head as he tries to reach a
burrowing Insect and the Cardinal sings to bewitch a mate.
Almost leaves, ready to burst out and open tiny arms to Sun
who started this cacophony to begin with.

The tree so high I can barely see its top,
So old I cannot reach around it,
The bark twisting around in swirls
making faces at me.

I rest my hand on a root and feel the quiver of life.
I love you tree.