NaPoWriMo, 2013, #30

LONGFELLOW AT HIS SHORTEST (PROMPT)

Another Longfellow distortion of facts. Our prompt was to take a poem and write the opposite. I chose “The Arrow and the Song”, which, out of respect for Longfellow because I’m about to ruin his name, I will put first.

I shot an arrow into the air,
It fell to earth, I knew not where;
For, so swiftly it flew, the sight
Could not follow it in its flight.

I breathed a song into the air,
It fell to earth, I knew not where;
For who has sight so keen and strong,
That it can follow the flight of song?

Long, long afterward, in an oak
I found the arrow, still unbroke;
And the song, from beginning to end,
I found again in the heart of a friend.

My version “The Song and The Arrow”:

I shot my arrow to the ground,
I knew right then where it was bound;
So slowly did it move away,
I could see precisely where it lay.

I belted out a song to earth,
The arrow entered to its girth;
Anyone with ears could hear,
My song, and run in fear!

Soon, quite soon, stuck in the clay
The arrow, broken, where it lay;
Parts of my song that I had sung,
Stolen by enemies one by one.

NaPoWriMo

BLAME  IT ALL ON SOMEONE ELSE

Once I saw a dainty dancer

She twirled across the stage.

I wondered if this little figure

Was filled with joy or rage?

 

I saw no feelings on her face

As it was just a blur

I stood there staring at her grace

And wished I could be her.

 

Once I saw a woman ride

A horse so artfully;

Not a movement did she make

Their minds were one, you see

 

They walked and turned while in the ring

They cantered, jumped and flew.

Horse and rider both as one

I said “I want to be you”

 

Unfortunately, I go through life

Not looking at my talents.

Not confident of me, myself,

And lacking any balance

 

I try to show some confidence

I act so large and tall.

But family, friends and strangers

Don’t see me here at all.

 

I passed this on to daughter love

I was afraid of her conceit

And now I feel so terribly bad

That all she only feels defeat.

 

I know we’ve all made errors

And wish we could have changed.

But, sadly we must live with them

And only feel deranged.

 

Well, I’ve made so many “mother” errors

I remember every one

They’re things my mother taught to me

And Dr. Spock’s “good” way.

 

So, I crawl again beneath my rock

Relieved to be alone.

Perhaps this is my chosen space,

My special safety zone.

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Have you ever thought how nice it would be if all people were quiet and didn’t talk so much!  Have you ever wondered how many words are necessary to say what you want?

 

SHRINKING THOUGHTS

Oh! Say I then loudly, leave me now!

Oh! Say I then loudly, leave me!

Oh! Say I then loudly, leave!

Oh! Say I then loudly.

Oh, say I then.

Oh, say I.

Oh, say!

Oh!

NaPoWriMo, 2013, #29 (Optional Prompt)

DEFENDER FROM THE BLENDER

Well, I guess my blender purchase was perfect. I sat down with a smoothie and used their instruction
In another language for the poem!

I purchased a licuadora* at K-Mart today
I have cravings for smoothies that won’t go away
The advertencia** for limpier*** were really quite clear
No submerge**** el cable***** and don’t use for beer.

*blender
**warning
***cleaning
****submerge
*****the cord

NaPoWriMo Time

Time

 

How can I work so much during the day

Spending and giving my time away

When I should be feeling the soundless air

Moving so sensuous through my hair

 

Instead I sit here inside my cave

Caging my brain so that it will behave

When I should be seeing the growth of green

But I just don’t have time to put up the screen

 

When I rise in the morning and look around

I count the things I’ve unfortunately found

And that now are just clutter just lying around

When I should be hearing the bird’s lovely sound

 

It doesn’t matter how much I do

It never gets done, I never get through

I make lists of things that I need to accomplish

When I should be smelling the outdoors like I wish

 

I stay up so late and work all I can

And I never finish the tasks I began

When I should be eating and enjoying the taste

I’m hurrying, scurrying and making waste

 

Who taught me to worry and hurry around?

Am I so greedy I can’t enjoy sound?

Who told me that I should not waste a minute or two?

And made me feel guilty of things I should do

 

I need to take time and to learn something new

Like ignoring the sights of the things I must do

I need to live simply and give up this trash

I need to enjoy living with not so much cash

 

But how?  I am asking you please do explain

How do I get rid of this hurry up pain?

Who can I trust to instruct me to release

Everything that I do that doesn’t mean peace

 

Maybe things will get better when April does go

And gives me my days back from NaPoWriMo

Some celebration that this month has been

I need to just clear my head and start over again.

NaPoWriMo, 2013, #28, Pretty in Pink

Pretty In Pink

My lady calmly crests the hill.

She wears the pink colors of innocence,

     her steed white enough to blind your eyes.

The battle stops as if every man has turned to stone.

Holding, with caution, her delicate pink parasol

     above her steed’s handsome, nodding head.

 She tilts her rose-tinted face as she comes slowly down the hill

     Smiling as if seeing not the insanity that has taken place.

  She sees not the dark red blood and gore running in rivulets,

     limbs now belonging to no one, strewn about recklessly

     as if they had dropped from the sky.

My lady smiles as she meets the eyes of the frozen fighters

     knowing that this battle has everything to do with her.

Knowing that with one word she can stop the carnage.

She takes no notice of the breezes bringing to her the

     overwhelming smell of warm fresh blood.

Her steed tiptoes through the entrails of men no longer men

     and moves its ears forward to the sounds of moaning.

Both steed and lady proudly walk onward

     and over the next hill.

The battle resumes its ferocity.

Napowrimo

  • One last poem before I go to bed:

The earth isn’t what it appears to be

Each living thing has its own part.

Grandmother Spider has made it all work

together with no sign of a heart.

Although each thing lives on another

it will work out in the end.

The winner will someday be loser,

The loser will someday defend.

Never will things work together.

The earth doesn’t have enough room.

Species keep disappearing.

It’s only just part of earth’s gloom.

When I get to the other dimension

and am able to see Dad again,

I won’t give a hoot about earth things

Or what I’ve been through or have been.

I look forward to my next journey.

I’m not worried at all about death.

I feel that death is a beginning

of another nice sort of a breath.

Please don’t feel bad when I leave you.

You’ll soon be joining me, too.

And after our rest in the graveyard

we’ll have many more things to do.

New places, new thoughts, new beginnings.

Who knows where or with who we will be?

If there’s nothing then we won’t be worried

Because we’ll be gone don’t you see?

So don’t miss me please just look forward

To things that we can’t even sense

and don’t look so sorry and speak of me

as if I was in the past tense.

NaPoWriMo, 2013, #26, Optional Ruin a Good Poem by Pulling Out Words for Another

This was another hysterical prompt (optional) where we were prompted (optionally) to take a poem written by another author and make another poem out of those words. Then we crossed out the words that we used and if we could, write a poem from them and so on and on.

Of course I had to choose a poem by Longfellow because I am also reading a book of local history written by John Ogden Wadsworth. Each word I took out of the original made my poem sillier and sillier!

I chose:
THE CHILD ASLEEP (From the French) by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

Sweet babe! true portrait of thy father’s face,
Sleep on the bosom that thy lips have pressed!
Sleep, little one; and closely, gently place.
Thy drowsy eyelid on thy mother’s breast.

Upon that tender eye my little friend,
Soft sleep shall come, that cometh not to me!
I watch to see thee, nourish thee, defend; –
‘T is sweet to watch for thee, – alone for thee!

His arms fall down; sleep sits upon his brow;
His eye is closed; he sleeps, nor dreams of harm.
Wore not his cheek the apple’s ruddy glow,
Would you not say he slept on Death’s cold arm?

Awake my boy! – I tremble with affright!
Awake, and chase this fatal thought! – Unclose
Thine eye but for one moment on the light!
Even at the price of thine, give me repose!

Sweet error! – he but slept, – I breathe again; –
Come, gentle dreams, the hour of sleep beguile.
O! when shall he, for whom I sigh in vain,
Beside me watch to see thy waking smile?

Then removed some words:
Sweet babe! true portrait of thy father’s face,
Sleep on the bosom that thy lips have pressed!
Sleep, little one; and closely, gently place.
Thy drowsy eyelid on thy mother’s breast.

Upon that tender eye my little friend,
Soft sleep shall come, that cometh not to me!
I watch to see thee, nourish thee, defend; –
‘T is sweet to watch for thee, – alone for thee!

His arms fall down; sleep sits upon his brow;
His eye is closed; he sleeps, nor dreams of harm.
Wore not his cheek the apple’s ruddy glow,
Would you not say he slept on Death’s cold arm?

Awake my boy! – I tremble with affright!
Awake, and chase this fatal thought! – Unclose
Thine eye but for one moment on the light!
Even at the price of thine, give me repose!

Sweet error! – he but slept, – I breathe again;Come, gentle dreams, the hour of sleep beguile.
O! when shall he, for whom I sigh in vain,
Beside me watch to see thy waking smile?

Then I removed some more words (which made it silly and nonsenceble):

Sweet true portrait.
Lips sleep on
Closely. Sleep,
thy mother’s eyelid.

Upon my eye
shall that cometh.
See thee nourish
alone is sweet.

Arms fall down.
Eye is closed.
Wore the ruddy.
Slept he on.

With tremble, I
chase this thought
but one moment.
Give me thine.

He but slept
hour of sleep.
Whom I shall.
watch to see.

Removing some more:

Thy babe
that have thy
little one
drowsy

Little friend,
soft sleep come.
I watch
for thee.

Sleep sits.
He sleeps.
Apples,
you say.

Awake!
Fatal
for thine
price.

Error!
the dreams!
O!
Waking.

Running out of words here!

Of
and
on
thy.

To ‘t
His,
nor his
would.

My boy,
and even
of sweet
gentle, for me.

NaPoWriMo, 2013, #25, Ballad Prompt (Optional)

This, my first attempt at a ballad, was based on where I live. Upstate New York, Wayne county, is filled with fertile soil and the weather allows the cultivation of apple tree orchards and fields of corn. “Drumlins” are the unique hills that run north to south that were created by the glacier movement around Lake Ontario. Due to the orchards and fields, when harvest comes you can bet your bottom dollar that I’ll be sitting here eating apple pies and fresh corn!

BALLAD OF WAYNE COUNTY

I saw her at a carnival
I knew she was my love.
A little slip of everything.
My little turtle-dove.

Not often do I leave the farm
it’s hard to make away
with apple trees and fields of corn
and chores to do each day.

She bought a piece of apple pie
and smiled as she strolled by.
her perfect figure passing me
before I caught her eye.

For years she kept just out of reach,
each drumlin she would climb
and seeing her much closer then
get larger I did find.

As I was reaching middle age
I reached her eye to eye
and saw to my astonishment
She’d eaten too much pie!

So, back to farming I did go
with no one for my wife
and now my apple trees and corn
are happily my life.

NaPoWriMo No Prompt 2013 #24

RENEWAL

The small sip that I’ve taken of this life
Has shown me that much of the strife
May not be overcome.

However I truly believe that I
Will be stronger. It is my
Gut feeling.

I will be stronger in my next life because
My gut feelings will reflect how it was
Here and now.

So, have cheer when you see the earth crumbling
Because although you may see how it is humbling
You will come back

And the earth will still be here waiting for you
Restored and with creatures incredibly new
And delightful.